Utilizing My Feedback

After I receiving feedback, I have decided to implement some changes towards the ideas I already had. I definitely want to create an image along with the advice that I was given for the cover; I already had something like this in mind so this positively adds onto my original thoughts. I feel that with this kind of cover I will be able to give off an appealing and trustworthy vibe as a source for fitness information and advice which is exactly the kind of vibe I wanted to achieve.
In regards to the cover lines suggestion, I am really glad this was suggested to me because although I probably would have thought of it on my own down the line, it was brought to my attention sooner and I can add it to the plans towards my magazine. This idea was also reinforced by research I have done; for example, this cover of fitness magazine in 2001 stating "Get bulge-free in 30 days!"; this kind of cover line draws attention from people who are struggling with losing weight and are seeking a solution. Another example of this is a cover from 2007 claiming "Drop 10 Lbs This Month!" which also expresses the opportunity of a solution to one's weight loss struggle and will excite a potential consumer into purchasing/reading the magazine. Here is an image of the kind of cover I want to achieve image-wise:

I feel that this serious stance with the black and white image with intense shadows establishes credibility because of the emphasis on her body that people want to work towards themselves through weight loss/exercise that is advertised by the magazine and then advertising the fact that this is achievable by the consumer.

Feedback

In class, I explicated to my classmates my ideas for my magazine; I talked about the articles that I'm planning on including and the kinda of images I want to produce for the magazine. After listening to my ideas, my peers gave me feedback on my ideas; I didn't get any negative feedback, it was mainly positive feedback or other ideas.
My classmates responded with advice for my cover and/or other images in the magazine. The advice I got for the cover was to something more silhouette-like image with sweat droplets glistening, like the NIKE ads; I was planning to do something like this in the first place, so I'm glad that my classmates agree. Here is a visually similar image to what I'm referring to:

For example, for the cover I could utilize focus on the two page spread I was planning for a cover line like "how to lose weight fast!" to market the magazine to people and entice people to open it, kinda like "clickbait". In regards to the articles, my classmates agreed with me and had nothing negative to say; they agreed that the articles I have in mind are appropriate for my magazine.

Examples of cover lines I'm referring to:

Kinds of Articles

After finally deciding on the fitness genre for my magazine, I wanted to brainstorm the kinds of articles that I want to write to begin thinking of what my magazine will contain. Here's a list of the kinds of articles I am considering/going to write:

1. My favorite workout apparel (cardio and weightlifting outfits/shoes)
2. Spread on my close friends's workouts and how they quickly achieved results
3. My personal leg routine
4. Men's leg routine
5. A smoothie recipe
6. Q&A with one of my teammates and/or my friend that plays for the UCF women's lacrosse team
7. Common gym mistakes
8. Common gym/workout misconceptions
9. Preworkout stretch routine
10. Acai bowl recipe
11. Cardio training routine
12. Women's arm routine
13. Men's leg routine
14. Men's vs . women's leg routine (differences, similarities etc.)
15. High reps vs low reps

I definitely want to include a recipe, one of my workout routines, and an article on my workout apparel because these are things that are very helpful to beginners and people who are interested in beginning their fitness journey. I also want to write articles that beginners and people who don't work out can understand but are also interesting and helpful to more advanced and experienced gym junkies. Unlike many magazines who focus on either beginners or veterans, I want to make my articles very versatile considering people's experience or lack thereof.

Final Genre Decision/Comparing Articles

After consideration and comparison between multiple genres of magazines, I finally made my decision. It was a little difficult for me to make a decision by comparing the topics superficially, but after research and comparison it was a lot easier. By looking at the front pages of online magazines, I was also able to compare the kinds of articles that would be included in each genre.
For example, for the beauty genre I looked at Allure, a well known beauty magazine, and the main article on the front page was titled "The Most Creative, Unique, and Daring Celebrity Looks of 2018" followed by an article titled "Makeup Revolution's Latest Launch Works as Blush, Highlighter, and Eyeshadow." Obviously, an article on the topic of celebrity makeup would not be realistic for me because I would have to somehow take pictures of celebrities. I also looked at a fashion magazine, VOGUE, that included articles like "This Made-in-Ghana Label Wants You to Keep Warm in Colorful African Textiles." Articles like this would be much more realistic for me because I know local boutiques that would be interested in participating. Finally, I viewed some fitness magazines; on the front page of fitness, the main article is "Lunge Free Butt Exercises For People With Bad Knees." This is also an article that could realistically be accomplished; I could easily write articles about my workout routines and take pictures of my friends working out.
After researching each genre, I finally decided on fitness because it is a part of my daily life as a player on the lacrosse team and among my friends's and my own workouts at the gym throughout the week. I feel that this will be the most enjoyable genre to do and the genre that I will be the most enthusiastic in creating my magazine.

Cover comparisons

To help with my genre decision, I decided to compare the covers of the genres I am considering. When looking at fashion magazines, it will usually be a woman posing on the cover with a bold masthead above them and multiple cover lines surrounding them. To me, this is very simplistic; of course I could be creative with it and make it more visually appealing than the covers I have seen, but it still doesn't spark my creativity as much as I want the cover to.

The same goes for beauty magazines, the covers usually include a woman posing very simply with a bold masthead and cover lines around them. The beauty magazine are more focused on the face though, which allows me the ability to do something more creative with the makeup on my model's face. But, it is still so simple for me when it comes to the colors and the kinds of cover lines that are expressed. The second cover I looked at was more my style in terms of the colors and the creativity in the look that is conveyed on the model's face. This one made me want to lean towards beauty but I am still exploring my options.

Finally, I looked at fitness magazine covers which are such a stark difference in comparison to fashion and beauty magazines. I liked the first cover a lot because rather than a person just posing looking "good", there is also an interesting background. The second cover also appealed to me because of the matching colors throughout the image and the masthead/cover lines.

Genre Brainstorming

When it comes to thinking about my options in terms of genres for the magazine, I'm already considering many options. I know I want to choose something that genuinely interests me and that I want to be very creative throughout my images through composition. I also already know that I definitely don't want to do a food or a magazine because cooking doesn't really interest me.
The main genres that I'm considering are beauty, fashion, and fitness; I know fitness is not related to the other two genres at all, but fitness is something that's very prominent in my life along with beauty and fashion despite the fact that they don't correlate very well. I also enjoy fashion and makeup in my daily life so this is why I am also considering these genres as well. When comparing my options I'm considering not only the kinds of images and the articles that go with each genre, but also the conventions of each genre and how I would portray these conventions throughout my magazine.

Magazine Format Research

To begin the process of creating my magazine, I wanted to research the aspects of a magazine that will make it impactful and appealing. In order to attract the most attention, I am planning on color schemes and other formatting. The first thing that people see when looking at a magazine is the cover, so the cover has to be as appealing as possible; this will determine whether or not someone is going to choose my magazine to read.
It is recommended to "not be shy" when it comes to the cover. The article I'm looking at recommends to "Try sticking to the A B C rule—stick to one A-heading (the magazine title), one strong (B) sub-heading (pulling out one article to be the main focus), and a larger selection of smaller (C) sub-headings. Almost every magazine cover uses this rule to promote balance in the layout." I am definitely going to utilize this rule when it comes to designing my cover.
Another tip from the article is to be minimalistic when it comes to fashion magazines in order to make the design look "as on trend and aspirational as possible". I still unsure about my genre so I don't know if this tip will be relevant to me yet, but it is a good thing to keep in mind.
The last tip I want to exploit from this article is to utilize beautiful photos as the main focus of the magazine. I agree that visuals are going to be really important in order to keep the reader engaged; a magazine with few images doesn't keep my attention, so I plan on having lots of images throughout the articles.

Source: 10 Tips for Designing High Impact Magazines